Saturday centus – week 3

first thank you all for your lovely comments on my last piece, its really appreciated. second my appolegies for not blogging all that much, I am quite the busy girl these days. the prompt words are in Bold. hope you enjoy it πŸ™‚

I look back over my shoulder, squinting into the late afternoon sun, gawking with stunned alarm at the broad rolling muddy waters of the Mississippi, she really stands there, in frond of the wild water. She is real, my friend from the mirror. How could I ever have believed that she was just imaginary? it where my mothers lies that poisoned my mind for so long, until her deathbed she kept her silence . The journey to this moment was a long emotional one, the trip to these waters where just last steps in meeting my sister again. She is Elena from the mirror and really does look like a reflection of mine.

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16 responses to “Saturday centus – week 3

  1. Another unexpected and surprising approach. Really touching and kind of mysterious. Well done!

  2. I loved this. So different than all the others. Great job.

  3. I agree, very different, very neat

  4. Another very unique twist on this prompt! Congratulations on such an original story. Good for you!

  5. Totally agree – very diffrent, well done

  6. You are producing some fantastic pieces! Loved this one too!

  7. Unique and mysterious. Nice job!

  8. Very mysterious, an old secret… very cool. πŸ™‚

  9. Old family secrets, great fodder for a novel. Nice twist, and great use of this week’s prompt!

  10. I’m lovin this Centus business…each one so unique…a mirror to my soul…nice job…Peace and blessings

  11. fryfan20, you are very talented with the story lines you create. I love it. Thank you πŸ™‚

  12. Wow, what an original take on the prompt! Of the ones I’ve read so far, this is my favorite. Very well done!

  13. Well done!

  14. How come we all come up with totaly different ideas I loved it

  15. Wow, this is fantastic

  16. Ooooh, you are complex. What a different twist. I love your imagination on this link! Thanks for participating…especially since you are so busy right now!

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