Saturday Centus week 57

so this weeks prompt writing is a bit different, we just get 25 words to make it work (normally we get 100) no problem, the prompt words are in bold:

These sunless days

I can not stand,

but

There is a way my friend,

please be brave

and hold my hand

as I walk to the end.

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10 responses to “Saturday Centus week 57

  1. Wow! This is very deep! Good work!!

  2. Great job ! Together they can face anything…so powerful !!!

  3. We all need a friend. Nobody makes it alone; that’s for sure.

    =)

  4. This is really beautiful and moving.

  5. Oh my. If it really is the end, it is best to be together. Beautiful thought. This was a very serious take on the prompt. Well done.
    Best wishes,
    Anna
    Miss O’Hara’s Last Words” SC wk 57

  6. Clearly heartfelt and with such depth, this poem is beautiful. As a Hospice nurse, I see this all the time, and it is wonderful when one has a hand to hold at the end. Thanks.

    Namaste………cj

  7. Happier Than A Pig in Mud

    That was touching, and very sad.

  8. Nicely done! A lot of emotion sqhttps://myclearspace.wordpress.com/2011/06/05/saturday-centus-week-57/#comment-form-guestueezed into a small package!

  9. Really lovely. The brevity makes it more stunning!

  10. Wow. What a lot of emotion you captured in this little gem of a story.

    I like the feeling of hope and sadness you wove throughout your little tale.

    Beautiful writing.

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