100 word challenge for grown ups week 75

this weeks challenge was a photo, this photo:

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and here is my entry:

Falling forever without going down

dreaming of the deep, the flight

every night I stood right here

and fell from sweet grace

after this night

there will be no more sunrise

after this flight

there will be no more smiles

now I just stand, stare

search for the ground below

question every move I make

wonder if I could really fall

after this night

there will be no more sunrise

after this flight

there will be no more smiles

would I torment you,

with one last confession?

would I haunt you forever,

with a lovers grave?

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3 responses to “100 word challenge for grown ups week 75

  1. This is heartwrenching!

  2. How horribly sad 😦 The repeated lines make it almost into a chant – a little eerie as if the speaker is already a ghost. Very effective.

  3. Oh man.

    Your pain is captured in every word here.

    Amazing writing.

    Does writing help the pain at all?

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